The cowboy country music used throughout the story when
talking about Hans Jordi marked me a lot as it reminds me of Western
Cowboy movies I used to love as a kid. I could picture Hans walking into
a bar with his gun on his belt and the belt buckle all shinny. When
Hans intern Sadat mentioned seeing him for the first time in civilian
clothes, the strumming country music guitar made this image in my head
even stronger(16:28).
After getting information about Hans from
the artist, the conversation drifted into teaching the storyteller how
to see and paint the horizon (12:12). This is obviously a tangent from
the story but, it is a very useful deviation as it adds a pause into the
story, giving the listener a break before getting back to the story. A
break such as this one is important for the listener to recapitulate and
think, especially in a mystery story case like this one. The listener
will loose this opportunity if the tangent is removed.
When
jimmy Turk explained how he found the belt buckle, at some point
(32:37), he started to talking about his back flip and jogging stories
that lead him to have couple stitches on his chin. The storyteller spend
some time investigating that stitches story which seems to be a common
thing in Jimmy's family. This is also clearly a tangent from the story.
however, the storyteller interestingly linked jimmy's family stitches
story to the buckle when she wondered about what it was with this belt
buckle with fate, adding more mystery to the story. Removing this
tangent may decrease the level of mystery of the story.
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