Magic Lantern

Magic Lantern

Sunday, November 8, 2015

Lauren Herron Revision Plan

    In planning to revise my project, I would like to experiment with how to play a video of myself under images of the friends I talk about in the story. I realized that my last rough cut was very monotonous and that the repeated videos of me standing by the pond were dull. I want to convey a similar feeling, but in a more interesting way. My story tells of how I still feel connected to my friends from my time abroad and how I have, in a way, extracted bits of their personalities and incorporated them into my own persona. This is why I want to play a semi-transparent video of myself while I show a series of images of my friends.

    The last feedback I received mentioned that the more concrete details I included about my friends were a step in the right direction, so I thought that it would be a good idea to include a visual when I describe the friends. I selected images that really capture the essence of the individuals and so these, over a video of my face, act to demonstrate my internal feelings of oneness with the women. I’m still having some issues with cropping the images and video to the right size, but I hope I can adjust them to fit more seamlessly together. I was planning to either cut them down in size or apply a fading to the video of my face so that it doesn’t look like a rectangle, but rather, just a ghostly apparition in the background. I want to make the video a bit ethereal, to make the images less scrap-book-y and provide a connecting point to the fleeting feelings that arise in my audio.


    I like the changes I have made to my audio and don’t plan to edit it anymore—at least not heavily. I added a new emphasis on the original “shiny bubble” metaphor from my very first audio version because I found images of spilled oil from my neighborhood in London and also images that I took of children playing with bubbles on the banks of the Thames. All in all, I plan to continue in the same direction with my revisions, but I want to make sure that my video is more seamless. 

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