For my most recent revision I plan
to make the visual elements of my story more personal, fix minor details in
order to make the story flow better, and to modify the videos of the Amazon at
the end. There are several parts of my story where I use images from the
internet rather than personal images. For example, the first image can be
changed from the impersonal picture of a mute button to a picture of me with my
hand over my mouth and the work “mute” written on my hand. Later in the
narrative I have a picture of a girl with question marks above her head. I plan
to change this image to a picture of me. There are certain pictures that I
cannot make more personal however. For instance, the pictures of the child
being bullied or the pictures of my friend and I when we were young. Although
these images make the story slightly less personal, I think it adds dynamism to
and enhances the relatable nature of the story because it demonstrates that
many others have the same experiences: being bullied as a child and finding
solace in a friend.
Furthermore, I will fix the quality
of some of the images used by exporting them at a higher resolution. The images
of my paper and work on ArcGIS were very blurry so they need to be enhanced in
order for the audience to appreciate them. Additionally, there was an image of
the Swanson School of Engineering logo that was not cropped correctly, so I
will modify that.
Finally, the videos of the Amazon
need to be refined. Because one of the clips I have at the top is much shorter
than the one next to it, it disappears quickly leaving a black space for too
long that can be distracting to the audience. I will slow down the shorter
video so that it disappears at the same time as the one next to it and then the
video at the bottom will grow to fill the screen.
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