Revision Plan

For my next revision I plan to re-record my audio but work majority on adding video and improving my images. There's a certain bigger picture I am striving to achieve with my piece and improving my images and adding video is, I feel, key to achieving this. 

         

I edited my audio script line-for-line. Refining my sentences and taking out unnecessary or wordy language really made a big difference.

Next, I plan on using some techniques to make my images look alive. Almost like they are moving. Hopefully I can do it with just my camera but it’s possible I might use some Premiere techniques or even Photoshop. I also need to work on sizing my pictures. A few of them were too large and I wasn’t able to size them to fit the Premier frame. I was able to figure out how to size them and will be implementing that for my next revision.

  

Lastly, I plan to add video. Currently I don’t have any video in my project. Adding video will really heighten the experience I hope to convey to my audience. The videos I plan to add will be short in length but it would be interesting to play with video effects. I don’t have a lot of experience with video so this will be a learning experience. But I really think it would add a great deal to my project. I plan to learn all that I can and implement it to video that I already have and add new video as well.

Overall, I’m refining my audio script, adjusting and improving my images and adding video with certain video techniques.