Revision Plan

I feel like there is not a large amount of major revision needed for my project. The only major thing that I really want to do is re-record my audio. I want to try to slow down a bit and have pauses that are more deliberate. I hope that through these pauses I can leave the audience some time to absorb and comprehend what I am saying. I do not want to do this too much because doing so will negate the message that my story is trying to say. I think that the way I am speaking my story now is too rushed and mumbled. Besides this, the only other thing that I want to do is fine editing. I want to fix some of the cuts to make them fit better with the words that are being said. Right now while some are good, others just need some slight fixing. I also think that I want to look for some other stock footage for certain parts of my story. The purpose of the stock footage is to provide a literal and comical translation of what I am and saying. Some of the clips that I had chosen were not as literal as I would like, especially at the moment when I say “four men on an adventure”. There are a few other spots that stick out as not fitting quite perfectly, but this one sticks out for me. Right now, there are only two men in the shot, but I want to try to find one that has four. Besides these small details that I would like to change and the re-recording of my audio, there is not much else that I think needs changed in my project.